Episode 1 - Revision history

Murphy: /* Scene 0.1: Rakka falls from the sky */ linkfix

2007-03-08T04:18:48Z

‎Scene 0.1: Rakka falls from the sky <span id="0.1"></span>: linkfix

Murphy: /* Complete Walkthrough */ simplify

2006-09-21T22:38:49Z

‎Complete Walkthrough: simplify

Murphy: forgot japanese title

2006-09-10T05:21:57Z

forgot japanese title

Murphy: header template

2006-09-10T05:20:59Z

header template

Murphy: /* Scene 2.2: Rakka is names */ typo

2006-09-06T23:18:35Z

‎Scene 2.2: Rakka is names <span id="2.2"></span>: typo

Murphy: /* Short Summary */ typo

2006-09-06T23:17:51Z

‎Short Summary: typo

Murphy: anchors div --> span

2006-09-06T23:13:42Z

anchors div --> span

Murphy: /* Scene 0.1: Rakka falls from the sky */ grammar

2006-09-06T22:53:42Z

‎Scene 0.1: Rakka falls from the sky: grammar

Murphy: deleted timecodes in the section headers

2006-09-06T22:52:58Z

deleted timecodes in the section headers

Murphy: link to GWP

2006-09-06T22:50:21Z

link to GWP

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 === Scene 0.1: Rakka falls from the sky <span id="0.1"></span> ===
-'''Location:''' Sky, above [[Old Home]] - '''Appearing:''' [[Rakka]], a [[Crow]].
+'''Location:''' Sky, above [[Old Home]] - '''Appearing:''' [[Rakka]], a [[crows|crow]].
 This is Rakka's [[dream]].
 When she [[#2.1|wakes up]] later, she can only remember the very last part of it, after the crow is gone. (starting at about [01:17]).
 == Act 1: Cocoon <span id="1"></span> ==

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 <div style="text-align:center;">'''Part II'''</div>
 <div style="background-color:#ffd; padding:0em 0.5em;">
 '''2.2''' <tt>[11'08-12'59]</tt> [[#2.2|Rakka is named]]<br>
 '''2.3''' <tt>[13'00-14'28]</tt> [[#2.3|Rakka gets her halo]]<br>
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 </div>
 {{clear}}
 == Act 0: Dream <span id="0"></span> ==

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 __NOTOC__
 {{Header:Episode
-|JapaneseTitle = 寺院 / 話師 / パンケーキ
+|JapaneseTitle = 繭 / 空を落ちる夢 / オールドホーム
 |EnglishTitle = Cocoon / Dream of Falling from the Sky / Old Home
 |NoPreviousEpisodeNumber =

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 __NOTOC__
+{{Header:Episode
-<div style="background:#fee; padding:0em 0.5em; border:1px solid #aaa;">
+|JapaneseTitle = 寺院 / 話師 / パンケーキ
-''This is an experimental site. I try to split up the first episode into '''acts''', '''sequences''', '''scenes''', and '''shots''' (as {{W|Sequence_(filming)|Wikipedia}} suggests) to make it easier for everyone to find the right point for inserting new text.''
+|EnglishTitle = Cocoon / Dream of Falling from the Sky / Old Home
-</div>
+|NoPreviousEpisodeNumber =
+|NextEpisodeNumber = 2
-<div style="font-size:1.3em; font-style:italic; font-weight:bold; text-align:center;">
+|GWPTopicID = 704
-Cocoon - A Dream of Falling from the Sky - Old Home
+}}
-</div>
-−
-'''{{Topic|704|Translation from the GWP}}''' ([[Gray Wings Project]])
 == Short Summary ==

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 === Scene 2.1: Rakka wakes up <span id="2.1"></span> ===
-=== Scene 2.2: Rakka is names <span id="2.2"></span> ===
+=== Scene 2.2: Rakka is named <span id="2.2"></span> ===
 === Scene 2.3: Rakka gets her halo <span id="2.3"></span> ===

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 == Short Summary ==
-A girl dreams of falling from the sky before she hatches from a [[cocoon]]. A group of five [[haibane]] welcomes her as she wakes up in the [[Guest room]] of [[Old Home]]. After telling them about her [[dream]], she is [[Haibane names|named]] "[[Rakka]]" (by [[Reki]]) and presented with a [[halo]] (by [[Hikari]]). When all others but Reki leave, she painfully grows her [[wings]]. After the fever is gone, she can stands up.
+A girl dreams of falling from the sky before she hatches from a [[cocoon]]. A group of five [[haibane]] welcomes her as she wakes up in the [[Guest room]] of [[Old Home]]. After telling them about her [[dream]], she is [[Haibane names|named]] "[[Rakka]]" (by [[Reki]]) and presented with a [[halo]] (by [[Hikari]]). When all others but Reki leave, she painfully grows her [[wings]]. After the fever is gone, she can stand up.
 For a more detailed summary, read about [http://cff.ssw.net/episodes/ep01.htm episode 1 on Sekai no Hajimari].

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-<div id="0"></div>
+== Act 0: Dream <span id="0"></span> ==
-== Act 0: Dream ==
+=== Scene 0.1: Rakka falls from the sky <span id="0.1"></span> ===
-−
-<div id="0.1"></div>
-=== Scene 0.1: Rakka falls from the sky ===
 '''Location:''' Sky, above [[Old Home]] - '''Appearing:''' [[Rakka]], a [[Crow]].
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 When she [[#2.1|wakes up]] later, she can only remember the very last part of it, after the crow is gone. (starting at about [01:17]).
-<div id="1.2"></div>
+== Act 1: Cocoon <span id="1"></span> ==
-=== Scene 1.2: Old Home ===
-<div id="1.3"></div>
+=== Scene 1.1: Reki finds Rakka's cocoon <span id="1.1"></span> ===
-=== Scene 1.3: Kana and Hikari arrive ===
-<div id="1.4"></div>
+=== Scene 1.2: Old Home <span id="1.2"></span> ===
-=== Scene 1.4: Outside the cocoon room ===
-<div id="1.5"></div>
+=== Scene 1.3: Kana and Hikari arrive <span id="1.3"></span> ===
-=== Scene 1.5: Inside the cocoon room ===
-<div id="1.6"></div>
+=== Scene 1.4: Outside the cocoon room <span id="1.4"></span> ===
-=== Scene 1.6: Inside the cocoon ===
-<div id="1.7"></div>
+=== Scene 1.5: Inside the cocoon room <span id="1.5"></span> ===
-=== Scene 1.7: The cocoon hatches ===
-<div id="2"></div>
+=== Scene 1.7: The cocoon hatches <span id="1.7"></span> ===
-<div id="2.1"></div>
+== Act 2: Name / Halo / Wings <span id="2"></span> ==
-=== Scene 2.1: Rakka wakes up ===
-<div id="2.2"></div>
+=== Scene 2.1: Rakka wakes up <span id="2.1"></span> ===
-=== Scene 2.2: Rakka is names ===
-<div id="2.3"></div>
+=== Scene 2.2: Rakka is names <span id="2.2"></span> ===
-=== Scene 2.3: Rakka gets her halo ===
-<div id="2.4"></div>
+=== Scene 2.3: Rakka gets her halo <span id="2.3"></span> ===
-=== Scene 2.4: Rakka grows wings ===
-<div id="2.5"></div>
+=== Scene 2.4: Rakka grows wings <span id="2.4"></span> ===
-=== Scene 2.5: Reki cleans Rakka's wings ===
-== Act 3: Welcome to Old Home ==
+== Act 3: Welcome to Old Home <span id="3"></span> ==
-<div id="3.1"></div>
+=== Scene 3.1: Rakka has halo hair <span id="3.1"></span> ===
 === Scene 3.1: Rakka has halo hair ===
-<div id="3.2"></div>
+=== Scene 3.2: Real wings <span id="3.2"></span> ===
-=== Scene 3.2: Real wings ===
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 This is Rakka's [[dream]].
-When she later [[#2.1|wakes up]], she can only remember the very last part of it, after the crow is gone. (starting at about [01:17]).
+When she [[#2.1|wakes up]] later, she can only remember the very last part of it, after the crow is gone. (starting at about [01:17]).
 <div id="0.2"></div>